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i wish i was a cliche
so my paper heart wouldn't
bleed anything but ink
{why does it feel like this world is just not for us
why does it feel like this world's all they've got for us
why does it feel like nobody's watching us"
--theory of a deadman

full title: i wish i could just tape it back together again
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:iconhatter-maddington:
Hatter-Maddington Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2010   Traditional Artist
Hi. I really like this, and I drew something with this written across the top. Please have a look it you do not want me to have it posted on this site please tell me so, and I will remove it. Your work is lovely. ^^

[link]
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:iconthe-tabby-cat:
The-Tabby-Cat Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
Also, paper cuts are skin deep.
I wouldn't hurt others as much.
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
thefireflyliberation Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
that's veryvery true :hmm:
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:iconkakanina:
kakanina Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2009
I keep searching words that i'm feeling at that moment, and your pieces keep coming up :D
And I'm glad they do, another beautiful piece ^^
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
thefireflyliberation Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2009
thank you so much
:]
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:iconkakanina:
kakanina Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2009
You're very welcome ^^
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:iconwakiagaru:
wakiagaru Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009
Mine doesn't ^^

Blood hasn't any more value than the words you write~ right?
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
it depends. in a way, they both keep me alive.
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:iconwakiagaru:
wakiagaru Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009
sure does. =) can't write if you're not alive, and can't live without writing.
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:iconcibbwin:
Cibbwin Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
So full of vitriol, and yet... I feel like you really mean this. Sad and sweet.
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
thank you :heart:
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:iconcibbwin:
Cibbwin Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome! :D
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:iconstarinyourskye:
StarInYourSkye Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2009
Awesome haiku
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
i am so glad you enjoyed it :]
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:iconhene777:
Hene777 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2009   Writer
A great example of how much one can say with so few words.
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
thefireflyliberation Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2009
thank you!
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:iconunspoken-unbroken:
Unspoken-Unbroken Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009
So samll, yet so wonderful. I love it darling ^^
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
thefireflyliberation Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009
thank you so much, hun.
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:iconunspoken-unbroken:
Unspoken-Unbroken Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009
Anytimes ^-^
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:iconvampirevengeance:
VampireVengeance Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2009  Hobbyist
Featured [link] :heart:
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
thefireflyliberation Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2009
that is so lovely of you, thank you.
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:iconvampirevengeance:
VampireVengeance Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2009  Hobbyist
Your welcome!
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:iconvampiresbleedtoo:
VampiresBleedToo Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2009
so short, so moving
and not at all confusing
er... rhyme anyone?
I like it, so often the best things in life are brief, small, hidden, and hard to find.
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
oh, thank you so much
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:iconvampiresbleedtoo:
VampiresBleedToo Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2009
welcome!
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:iconhappymegs81:
happymegs81 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2009
You didn't write very many words but it has tons of meaning and feeling, great job.
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
ah, yes. this was one of those times i had a sentence that i didn't want to add to.
to me, it felt complete on its own :)
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:iconhappymegs81:
happymegs81 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2009
yes. I understand, i have a bunch of those. and I write them on my wall in sharpy because I don't want to forget them.

sorry, lol, so random.
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:iconfirefairy102:
FireFairy102 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2009
Wow :heart: Incredible
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
you and your wows. i love them.
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:iconfirefairy102:
FireFairy102 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2009
haha thanks
^^
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:iconblacksmithironwolf:
blacksmithironwolf Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2009
this is like my first day on deviant art. I saw this and instantly felt moved beyond belief. Yours was so epic that i am in awe. thank u so so so much. Now i can spend the rest of my day happy knowing that this is saved as a fave
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
well, first off: welcome to deviantart!
and secondly, thank you soso much!
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:iconxncis-junkiex:
XNCIS-JunkieX Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2009
That was beautiful. I love it.
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
thank you!
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:iconxncis-junkiex:
XNCIS-JunkieX Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2009
Np prob!
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:iconmariposakisses25:
mariposakisses25 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2009  Student Photographer
I can't even explain how much I LOVE this statement! :heart: :hug:
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
thank you soso much.
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:iconmariposakisses25:
mariposakisses25 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2009  Student Photographer
You are ever so welcome! :D :heart:
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:icondead-now:
dead-now Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I suppose this gets its point across...

I feel that this is playing far too heavily into the cliché idea. If this is trying to poke at the subject, I'm not really sure. I simply couldn't get passed the fact that this whole thing was indeed a cliché itself.
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
well, that would be the point. i was saying i wish i was a cliche, so my emotions could just be cliched.
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:icondead-now:
dead-now Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I understand that and it's an interesting thought. I was just saying that when considering the value of the form itself, it's lacking BECAUSE of the blatant cliché. I'm not saying it's bad, just lacking is all.
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
i appreciate your opinion.
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:iconaiemcross:
aiemcross Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
so little that means so much.
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
thank you soso much, darling.
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:iconkatiejuby:
katiejuby Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha. I remember reading one of your other poems earlier. You write so well. This is short but good. It's giving me a great picture idea. ^^
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
thank you so much.
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:iconkatiejuby:
katiejuby Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcomes. You deserved it. ^^
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:icondudette-ymo:
dudette-ymo Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2009
trying to get all Emily Dickinson, eh?
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:iconthefireflyliberation:
pshh, i wish :P
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